Wednesday, April 9, 2008

I need some input...

Here are the pages I was working on at Scrap Mania on Saturday night. I tried finishing them up today but I want some honest opinions....
The entire page is glued down with the exception of the flowers (the glitter on them is still drying). What I need to know is: Does it need something else, and what? Does the left page title look ok with only the one black strip or should it have 2 narrow black strips similar to the right hand page? Should I move the flowers someplace else? Do I need more rub-ons? Where? My original title was Flower Girl but it just didn't look good so I changed it...please don't tell me I shouldn't have as I already glued my letters down. Is the right hand page too empty in its bottom left corner? What do you think?


10 comments:

Kisa Peters said...

I LOVE IT! I am feeling that maybe something, another flower, perhaps, would look good on right page, bottom left corner..? What do you think? Sort of to tie them together?

Nancy said...

I also love this page layout! Gorgeous little girl.
How about a journaling box with maybe a small flower in the corner. This would be for the right page ...bottom left corner.

JAR said...

I think the title is perfect -- Ntural beauty like a rose name and also like your sweet girl! I agree with Kisa -- a flower in the bottom left of the right page would tie the two pages together. Excellent!

Kisa Peters said...

Boy has it been a nutty day! I had to run to the hardware store twice for my dad because he was working on our pump.....and the dumb people at the hardware store kept giving me the wrong stuff! I swear......it wasn't me!! : )

mwebb said...

I love it just the way it is, but if you wanted to add something, I'd agree with the others, a flower or two on the bottom left side of the right page.

Awesome page!!!!

Delia said...

I love it Heather, what a beautiful page. I agree with adding another flower to the bottom. The rule of 3's, don't know why but 3 of anything just seems right. The rub-ons are gorgeous, makes me feel like the page has movement. (Like I know what I am talking about LOL). As for the double black lines, I don't think you need one for the top. By having the extra one on the right...it makes me feel like the page ends there like it's suppose to. Again awesome page, Annabel is really beautiful and looks so graceful....I am excited for you.

Maureen said...

I agree with the above - either a journaling block or a flower or 2 for that blank area on the right page. Otherwise, I love the title and the pictures and LO are beautiful!!

Angie C said...

Such gorgeous pages Heather :-) I also think maybe just a little something in the blank space on the right hand page - but apart from that they are excellent

Karen said...

I think it is great and think the title is brilliant so you were right to change it!
Sit back and enjoy!!!

Jennifer (SCS: jennifer-g) said...

OMG I love it! I LOVE the new title & the flowers look great. The pink softens them up instead of straight black. Did you put glitter on the pics or is that the flash?